Ad Fun with Ginny(come play with the rookie)

Paper Moon is a fun Soul-Eater Role-play with a friendly Staff that welcomes all Role Players of any level to enjoy the site and add new characters of any kind to the roster. We offer a great enviorment with an interesting plot, great web design, etc.

Okay so I decided we can play a game. This is a (very crappy) ad I made for this site. It needs improving, but before I did the revising I thought why not ask others what they think. So all members of the site post down below what you would do to improve this ad. For example I used a picture from google. Would you have drew your own, or maybe edit a few pictures to make it more unique. It's all up to you.
(this ad was not to be posted on any site unless I had BossDawg's permission however I will edit this as suggestions are made and maybe if he likes he'll use it. You never know)

Thank you, Ginny. However, we already have an ad. One that was made by the co-admin of the site. Wanna see?

PAPER MOON


OC-ONLY SOUL EATER RP